Thursday, 29 September 2011

Through the Tunnel

setting
the story through the tunnel was set at the beach,where by the young boy and his mother went for a vacation at the sea.at the beach it was sunny and all they do is swim and sunbath.
plot
when jerry and the mom went to the beach he always loved being at the beach ,because he always had fun,as the place was looking wild and no one there, the mother told her that he can go to the big beach when he had enough.jerry loved swimming and he always went out to go swim where he even got to get friends.one day as he went to the big rock he found a big guy who went through that big rock and he also wanted to give it a try.as he was seating there he felt the salt water in his eyes and then he ran back to the mom to go see how she is doing and to also tell that her he needs goggols so he can go under water.he was practicing on how to breath under water for long.as he went under water he saw a black wall of rock loaming  at him and then he touched it and bobbed up at once to the surface.it was time he have dicided to go through that hole,when he jumped into the water he saw above his head ,a crack running up through the rock sunlight was falling through it showing the dark clean rock of the tunnel.as he was in the water his head was swelling and his lungs cracking and than there was a rock in the dark pulling himself foward.he felt he was dying.as he went back to the mom with bloodstains to the mom and he didn't wanted the mom to see how he is,he went quickily in the bathroom and then went to the mother after all.he was looking so pale that the mother was so worried about how he is looking.they had their lunch together and had some discussions.
main character
the main character is the young boy jerry,who grew up as an orphan and the mother was a window.he loved swimming that he even passed through the tunnel. one thing that i loved about this boy is that he is a brave boy and always loved the mother.i hated the part that he always wanted to try out things even if he knows its aint good for his health.


 

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