Wednesday, 5 October 2011

the silk scarf

setting
This story was set in johannesburg of south africa,it was set during the morden times as they lived in morden houses and driving morden cars.
plot
The story talks about a mrs Nebo a women who was married to a rich men mr Nebo in their town there were some indians who were allowed to set up teir shops in the plaza area.thy sell very nice clothes where mrs tebo always do her shoppings.one day she went to the shopping mall with her bodyguards driving a mecedes benz and her friend Margret.she was a kind of women who loved clothes so much,as they enterd the mall she saw in one shop were they sell beatifull idian dreses,then she decided to buy it.as she bought it the lady asked if she has a silk scarf that will fit on that dress but then she didn't have so she decided to go look around so she can buy one.as she was walking around she saw a beatifull silk scarf that she love so much.she asked the men to give to her so she can pay for it,as she was paying she realised the money wasn't enough  she was fiteen rand short,she asked the men if she can give a cheque but then the men already have his rules that no  cheques are allowed.she started going on insulting the shopkeeper.the men didn't care about what mrs nebo was saying because he always sticked to his rules.as everyone in the market came to listen what was happening mrs Nebo's friend was telling the men that she is the wife of mr nebo who will become a minister.as they head that ,mr Sader  dicided to to take him out side and let him just to get a scarf as a gift as they were afraid of what wiil happen.finally she got her scarf as a gift.
main chareter
Mrs Nebo was the main character,she was of medium height ,with heavy loins she was slight with a lovely smile  and teeth.ione thing i hated about her is that she is was full of her self too much she thinks the only one to be respected.what i loved about her is that she was brave that she knows her rights,and she can stand up for them.

Thursday, 29 September 2011

Through the Tunnel

setting
the story through the tunnel was set at the beach,where by the young boy and his mother went for a vacation at the sea.at the beach it was sunny and all they do is swim and sunbath.
plot
when jerry and the mom went to the beach he always loved being at the beach ,because he always had fun,as the place was looking wild and no one there, the mother told her that he can go to the big beach when he had enough.jerry loved swimming and he always went out to go swim where he even got to get friends.one day as he went to the big rock he found a big guy who went through that big rock and he also wanted to give it a try.as he was seating there he felt the salt water in his eyes and then he ran back to the mom to go see how she is doing and to also tell that her he needs goggols so he can go under water.he was practicing on how to breath under water for long.as he went under water he saw a black wall of rock loaming  at him and then he touched it and bobbed up at once to the surface.it was time he have dicided to go through that hole,when he jumped into the water he saw above his head ,a crack running up through the rock sunlight was falling through it showing the dark clean rock of the tunnel.as he was in the water his head was swelling and his lungs cracking and than there was a rock in the dark pulling himself foward.he felt he was dying.as he went back to the mom with bloodstains to the mom and he didn't wanted the mom to see how he is,he went quickily in the bathroom and then went to the mother after all.he was looking so pale that the mother was so worried about how he is looking.they had their lunch together and had some discussions.
main character
the main character is the young boy jerry,who grew up as an orphan and the mother was a window.he loved swimming that he even passed through the tunnel. one thing that i loved about this boy is that he is a brave boy and always loved the mother.i hated the part that he always wanted to try out things even if he knows its aint good for his health.


 

Thursday, 22 September 2011

my experience when creating my blog

Creating my blog was one of the challeges i really experienced through out.I created this blog three times because for the very first time i didn't know what was going on, i mean me not knowing what a blog is all about.At first when i heard of it ,i thought it was something that is going to be about this boring english things but then it turn out be that it is more intresting then i have ever thought.Its more or less like facebook because its all about posting,commeting and all the fun things.Creating my blog i can say it was really difficult for me ,only when i tried creating for the first two times.Later on it was so easy and simple as i even started helping my fellow class mates.The most challenge i experienced was when i created my first account ,i didn't know what i have created because when i tried looking for my adress i couldn't find it .I tried going back to see if i will get it,all of the sudden it turned out that everything was gone.What made me angry is that when i started all over again they are telling me the email iam using is already in use,now what i did i went back and created another email and then start over again.It was really stressful creating it, but nevertheless iam so happy iam enjoying now.awehsome!